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Tuesday, 28 July 2015

Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Term 3

I am looking forward in learning about art and science and in camp archery because these are my favourite subject




Tuesday, 21 July 2015

my writing learning gaol

This term in writing I am going to be working on two goals.
They are:
Include some of the important features from the ‘text type’ checklist.

Write my ideas in the correct order.

I will know I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence of these in my writing.

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

The amazing day yesterday

This is me and Mrs Page



Hi it's me Manahal  and Mrs Page we played netball teachers vs kids but the teachers won but that's all right because practice make's perfect and it's just a game.

Monday, 22 June 2015

space inquiry

What happens to the earth when the sun dies if you want to find out more

Thursday, 18 June 2015

Amazing trip to MERC

Today we went to MERC because we wanted to find out were we will be sleeping
and were we will have dinner and breakfast the chef will be making foods for us.
Musical Turtle

Flying Fox

Climbing up the tower 
Mrs Archer swinging

Boats we will sail on

Bunk Beds

Outside the gates


Wednesday, 10 June 2015

the phase of the moon

Explanation writing

WALT: I am learning to write an explanation.

Success criteria
Me
LB
T
I have used an interesting title that tells the reader what my writing is about


Y
I have used a general statement to introduce the topic


Y
My writing explains how one thing leads to another



I have used time connectives to show the order of the process (first...next…)



I have organised my text using paragraphs



I have linked together 2 or 3 sentences to show cause and effect (so…if…this causes...this makes...because)



I have used technical vocabulary



I have used capital letters, full stops and commas




Use this chart to help you to write an explanation on the 8 phases of the Moon.




The phases of the Moon

Have you ever wondered why the Moon can look different every night? There are eight key phases that the Moon goes through every 29.5 days, which is the same as one month.


The first new moon is dark with a ring in the circle every few days it changes because the
moon orbits the earth.
Second is the waxing crescent it changes every few month