WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some treats. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll  barbie and a soft toy something very soft like an teddy bear. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items and it is a t-shirt and a pair of shoes. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block it is a strawberryflavor. Lucky me!

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